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'...Remember...'

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"Remember me!" she screams,
in the silence of her tears.
She locks away the memories
and throws away his fears.
She holds his hand through reckoning;
she kisses with a sigh.
"Remember me!" she pleads,
as if without him she'd die.
It was pure love that drove her there,
to a world of loathing and despair,
to the emptiness inside her soul,
the place where no one seems to care.
And everyday she remembers him,
the warmth inside his sheltered gaze.
She screams, "Remember!" with her eyes,
she's running out of days.
"Remember me!" she begs sometimes,
without her voice to yell.
She stares into his narrow eyes,
where, they say, she fell.
C'mon, you know it, don't lie...we've ALL written a First-Love-Poem at like, 14, lol. For how long ago it was, though, it's not half-bad in retrospect. I just can't get over the last two lines; some of the best I've ever written-down. Comment?

Enjoy.

-Michelle
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mousette's avatar
*grips chest* 'Where she fell' what dramatic language!!! Really nicely done. I like that normally (through my experience) that love is more negitive then positive. or at least you have to get through the negitve side of love before you can see the positive. With admiration, Clare x